請幫我比對中文看英文單字和文法上哪裡有錯誤??? - 自行車

Linda avatar
By Linda
at 2008-11-02T00:00

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這是一份我自己擬定的英文稿,考英文口試用的。但我確定中文內容後,英文卻變得怪怪的,請慧英文的人幫幫我吧~~~感恩!!中文的內容是:索尼:嗨,Elmo。旅行好嗎?Elmo:好。謝謝。索尼:請問你要去哪裡?Elmo:請帶我去新光百貨公司。索尼:哪一個?在台北有四家。Elmo:噢,抱歉。新光百貨公司台北站前店。索尼:好,您這裡在吃或在購物?Elmo:在購物。索尼:了解。嘿,你去了哪一個國家?Elmo:日本。索尼:日本?哪個部分?Elmo:東京。您是否知道它?索尼:不,但我的朋友去年去日本。很棒的國家。索尼:好吧,我們在了。這是新光百貨公司站前店,你說好要給我五百。Elmo:好。這是給你。索尼:嘿。Elmo!這是一千。Elmo:沒關係。Elmo:前陣子石油上漲對你有影響嗎?索尼:拜託,我騎的是自行車。Elmo:抱歉,我說笑話。索尼:那是好的!祝你愉快。再見!Elmo:您也騎慢點。再見。英文部分(好多怪怪的):Elmo:Sony.Sony:Hi,Elmo.howwasthetrip?Elmo:Fine.Thankyou.Sony:Whereareyougoing?Elmo:I’mgoingtoSHINKONGDEPARTMENTSTORE,please.Sony:Whichone?TherearefourhereinTaipei.Elmo:Oh,sorry.TheSHINKONGDEPARTMENTSTORETAIPEIstationBranch.Sony:OK,Areyouhereoneatingoronshopping?Elmo:Onshopping.Sony:Right.Hey,whichcountryhaveyougoneto?Elmo:Japan.Sony:Japan?Whichpart?Elmo:Tokyo.Doyouknowit?Sony:No,ButmyfriendhasgonetoJapanlastyear.Greatcountry.Sony:Well,hereweare.ThisistheSHINKONGDEPARTMENTSTORESTATIONBranch,yousaidmustgivemefivehundred.Elmo:OK.Thisisforyou.Sony:Hey.Elmo!Thisisonethousand.Elmo:Indifferent.Elmo:Firsttimeperiodpetroleumrisetoyouinflnential?Sony:Asks,Irideamthebicycle.Elmo:Sorry,Icrackajoke.Sony:That’sok!Haveagoodstay.Bye-Bye!Elmo:Yourideslow,too.Bye-Bye....Showmore

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Mary avatar
By Mary
at 2008-11-06T23:45
Elmo:Oh,sorry.TheSHINKONGDEPARTMENTSTORETAIPEIstationBranch.sorry可省去Sony:OK,AreyouhereoneatingoronorShoping?Elmo:Onshopping.改成OK,Andwhyareyougothere?Doyouwanttoeatorgoshoping?Yes,Iwanttobuy物品Sony:Right.Hey,whichcountryhaveyougoneto?改成Right.Bytheway,whatcountrieshaveyougoneto?Sony:No,ButmyfriendhasgonetoJapanlastyear.Greatcountry.改成No,ButmyfriendwenttoJapanlastyear,andhesaiditwaswonderful.Sony:Well,hereweare.ThisistheSHINKONGDEPARTMENTSTORESTATIONBranch,yousaidmustgivemefivehundred.改Sony:Well,wearrive.ThisistheSHINKONGDEPARTMENTSTORESTATIONBranch,youpromisemefivehundreddollar.Elmo:OK.Thisisforyou.改Elmo:OK.Hereyouare.Sony:Asks,Irideamthebicycle.改Comeon,Iridethebicyclenotmotorcycle.Elmo:Sorry,Icrackajoke改Justkidding.→不用一直道歉啦==Elmo:Yourideslow,too.Bye-Bye.改RideCarefully.Bye-Bye.加油祝你通過^^2008-11-0205:54:10補充:Sony:Right.Hey,whichcountryhaveyougoneto?改成Right.Bytheway,whatcountrieshaveyougoneto?更正改成Right.Bytheway,whatcountrieshaveyoubeento?...Showmore
Charlotte avatar
By Charlotte
at 2008-11-05T23:45
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