有關於修改英檢初級複試段落寫作文批改的即時疑問~急急急~>< - 自行車

Tristan Cohan avatar
By Tristan Cohan
at 2014-04-17T00:00

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以下是我剛剛寫好的英文作文:Thisspringbreak,IwentonacyclingtourofTaiwanbybicycle.IstartedfromTaipei101,androdetowardthesouthfirst.InTaichung,Ivisitedthebeautifulparkandatesomeitsfamousfood,Suncakes,there.Then,onmywaytoKentingNationalPark,Iaccidentallyfelloffmybicycle.Ithurtsomuch,butIdidn'tgiveup.Ifinallygotbacktomysweethomeandsawmyparentswaitingatthedoor.Theyhabeenwaitingformefora

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Daniel avatar
By Daniel
at 2014-04-19T07:44
ThisspringbreakvacationIwentonacyclingtourofgoingaroundTaiwanbymybicycle.IstartedfromTaipei101building,androdetowardtotheSouthfirst.InTaichung,IvisitedthebeautifulTaichungParkandatesomeitsfamousfood,SunCakes,there.Then,keepinggoingonmywaytoKenting,thenationalparkatthesouthernendoftheisland,intheway,Iaccidentallyfellofffrommybicycle,ithurtsomuchbadly,butIdidn'tgiveup,soIfinallycouldgetbacktomys
Carolina Franco avatar
By Carolina Franco
at 2014-04-17T18:55
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Mason avatar
By Mason
at 2014-04-17T17:33
下面的網址應該對你有幫助http://phi008780416.pixnet.net/blog
David avatar
By David
at 2014-04-17T10:23
4級分沒問題了流暢度夠+文法OK也有機會到5級分但注意一點你寫太多了題目要求50字最大極限就是壓縮在70~80字內有些評分人員可能會覺得你寫太多廢話所以斟酌給分也有些評分人員會覺得50字算蝦米!?100字寫得卡詳細啦這樣...Showmore
Quintina avatar
By Quintina
at 2014-04-21T04:05
你這個實力初級複試一定過的了阿滿分100的話成績大概85吧感覺文章挺順暢的結尾結的也挺好
Kelly avatar
By Kelly
at 2014-04-17T22:47
Iknow......XDbutIjustwanttoknowitI'msonervousabouttheGEPT'swritingtest>
Michael avatar
By Michael
at 2014-04-21T20:53
IwentonacyclingtourofTaiwanbybicycle==>IwentonatourofTaiwanbybicycleTheyhabeenwaitingfor==>TheyhavebeenwaitingforScoreisnoteverything,learninggoodEnglishis.

請旅遊達人提供五天環島行程規劃

Robert avatar
By Robert
at 2014-04-17T00:00
暑假想帶著家人開著車體驗環島、露營的旅遊樂趣,請旅遊達人參考下列方式,提供五天的行程規劃方案,給予20� ...

求規劃花蓮火車自助旅遊2天一夜行程~謝謝

Noah avatar
By Noah
at 2014-04-17T00:00
1.坐火車從樹林出發2.希望景點有太魯閣~七星潭~夜市~糖廠~馬太鞍.....3.有10個大人+一個3歲小孩4.希望睡通鋪~5.交通 ...

請給我一份旅遊計劃

Aaliyah avatar
By Aaliyah
at 2014-04-17T00:00
請幫我規劃一份宜蘭兩天一夜的旅遊計劃我是要下午從台北搭火車開始的行程包括旅遊和住宿~~謝謝

史上最難的自行車遊戲的網址遊戲

Liam avatar
By Liam
at 2014-04-16T00:00
我不要影片的!真的有這個遊戲嗎???

機車跟機車(我被撞)對方有事但初步研判無結果該如何自保

William avatar
By William
at 2014-04-16T00:00
請問一下懂車禍法律的勿跟我說什麼盡道義人心上的責任之類我只要事實跟自保就這麼簡單現代的人心太黑了所以 ...