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有關於修改英檢初級複試段落寫作文批改的即時疑問~急急急~>< - 自行車

Tristan Cohan avatarTristan Cohan · 2014-04-17

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以下是我剛剛寫好的英文作文:Thisspringbreak,IwentonacyclingtourofTaiwanbybicycle.IstartedfromTaipei101,androdetowardthesouthfirst.InTaichung,Ivisitedthebeautifulparkandatesomeitsfamousfood,Suncakes,there.Then,onmywaytoKentingNationalPark,Iaccidentallyfelloffmybicycle.Ithurtsomuch,butIdidn'tgiveup.Ifinallygotbacktomysweethomeandsawmyparentswaitingatthedoor.Theyhabeenwaitingformefora
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Daniel avatarDaniel2014-04-19
ThisspringbreakvacationIwentonacyclingtourofgoingaroundTaiwanbymybicycle.IstartedfromTaipei101building,androdetowardtotheSouthfirst.InTaichung,IvisitedthebeautifulTaichungParkandatesomeitsfamousfood,SunCakes,there.Then,keepinggoingonmywaytoKenting,thenationalparkatthesouthernendoftheisland,intheway,Iaccidentallyfellofffrommybicycle,ithurtsomuchbadly,butIdidn'tgiveup,soIfinallycouldgetbacktomys
Carolina Franco avatarCarolina Franco2014-04-17
發問者你好：幫你整理好了，詳細資料在這邊http://adf.ly/k1RTS希望其他回答者也認同我意見^^...Showmore
Mason avatarMason2014-04-17
下面的網址應該對你有幫助http://phi008780416.pixnet.net/blog
David avatarDavid2014-04-17
4級分沒問題了流暢度夠+文法OK也有機會到5級分但注意一點你寫太多了題目要求50字最大極限就是壓縮在70~80字內有些評分人員可能會覺得你寫太多廢話所以斟酌給分也有些評分人員會覺得50字算蝦米!?100字寫得卡詳細啦這樣...Showmore
Quintina avatarQuintina2014-04-21
你這個實力初級複試一定過的了阿滿分100的話成績大概85吧感覺文章挺順暢的結尾結的也挺好
Kelly avatarKelly2014-04-17
Iknow......XDbutIjustwanttoknowitI'msonervousabouttheGEPT'swritingtest>
Michael avatarMichael2014-04-21
IwentonacyclingtourofTaiwanbybicycle==>IwentonatourofTaiwanbybicycleTheyhabeenwaitingfor==>TheyhavebeenwaitingforScoreisnoteverything,learninggoodEnglishis.