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指考英文作文幫評分修改 - 自行車

Franklin avatarFranklin · 2014-04-22

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因為不知道自己程度到哪很怕考差所以請大家幫忙評分0~20分題目：騎自行車流行的原因及優缺點Inrecentyear,theadvanceoftechnologymakesourlivesmorecomfortable,butitisdoubleedgedswards.Technologysimultaneouslypollutestheenvironment.Withtheoilandelectricitypricesrunninghigh,environmentalprotectionconsciousnessgainground.Peoplefinditadvantageoustoridethebicycle.Ridingthebicyclenotonlycostlessmoney,butalsomakespeopledomoreexercise.Toencouragepeopletochoosebicycleovercarsormotorcycles.TheTaipeicitygovernmentestablishedthepublicbicyclesystem---Youbike.Aslongasyouhaveaneasy-card,youcanborrowbicyclebyitanywhereandanytimeinTaipei.So,bicyclesareeasytogetnow.Furthermore,Taiwanissosmallthatyoucangotoalotofplacesjustbyridingbicycle.Besides,youwillhavealotoffunseeingsceneriesalongtheroad.However,ridingthebikeinthebigcityisverydangerous,especiallyinbadweatherorwhenoneisforcedtorideontheroadwithnobikepaths.Youhavetoavoidcarsontheway.Torespondtothisbiketrend,morebicyclepathsshouldbebuilt.Afterall,theadvantageofridingbicycleismuchbetterthanharm....Showmore
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David avatarDavid2014-04-24
Inrecentyears,theadvanceoftechnologymakesourlivesmorecomfortable,butitisadoubleedgesswards.Technologysimultaneouslypollutestheenvironment.Withandmakesthepricesofoilandelectricitypricesrunninghigh.Asenvironmentalprotectionconsciousnessgainsground,peoplefinditisadvantageoustoridetheabicycle.Ridingthebicyclewhichisnotonlycostslessmoney,butalsomakespeopledomoreexercises.Toencouragepeopletochoosebicyclesoverinsteadofcarsormotorcycles,theTaipeicitygovernmentestablishedthepublicbicyclesystem,Youbike.AslongasyouhaveanEasyCard,youcanborrowabicyclebywithitanywhereandanytimeinTaipei.So,bicyclesareeasytogetandusenow.Furthermore,Taiwanissosmallthatyoucangotoalotofplacesjustbyridingabicycle.Besides,youwillhavealotoffunofseeingsceneryalongtheroad.However,ridingtheabikeinthebigcityisverydangerous,especiallyinabadweatherorwhenonepeopleisforcedtorideontheroadwithnobikepaths,Youhavingtoavoidcarsonalltheway.Torespondtothisbiketrend,morebicyclecyclingpathsshouldbebuilt.Afterall,theadvantageofridingabicycleismuchbetterthanharm.17分2014-04-2612:47:20補充：修正1字AslongasyouhaveanEasyCard,youcanborrowabicyclewithitborrow應改為rent,borrow用於金錢之借貸。...Showmore
Poppy avatarPoppy2014-04-22
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