(急~~)請英文高手幫我看一下英文寫作...感謝！！ - 自行車

By Kumar
at 2007-12-20T00:00

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請英文高手幫我看一下哪裡需要更正的...感謝！！Inthemultitudinoussports,Iliketoridethebicyclemost.Inmymemories,therearemanyinterestingthingaboutridingbicycle.WhenIwasalittlegirl,myoldersistertaughtmehowtoridethebicycle.Ioftenridethebicycleeverywheretoplaywithotherchildren.Lastsummervacation,mybestfriendsandIwenttoBalibybicycle.Wehadaverygoodtimeandhopedtodothesamethinginthenexttime.Ibelievethatridingthebicyclecanbringpeoplecloser.Iliketoridethebicycle,facingthefeelingofbreeze.Iwasalsoadmiringthescenerywhileridingthebicycle.Ridingbicyclenotonlymakesmehappybutalsohelpmethrowoutmyworries.Itmakesmyhealthbecomebetter.Anditalsoletmefeelfullofpowerinmybody.Themostimportantthingisthatridingbicyclecan’tproduceairpollution.Ridingbicycleisagreatbenefittothebodyandtheentireworld.感謝你花時間幫我修正喔~~~~~@@"或者可以在增加什麼句子...怕整體結構散亂！主要是說我喜歡騎腳踏車...然後寫它的好處.......Showmore

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By Quintina
at 2007-12-22T21:27

1.Inthemultitudinoussports,Iliketoridethebicyclemost.Inmymemories,therearemanyinterestingthingaboutridingbicycle.WhenIwasalittlegirl,myoldersistertaughtmehowtoridethebicycle.Ioftenridethebicycleeverywheretoplaywithotherchildren.Lastsummervacation,mybestfriendsandIwenttoBalibybicycle.Wehadaverygoodtimeandhopedtodothesamethinginthenexttime.Ibelievethatridingthebicyclecanbringpeoplecloser.中文翻譯:在伾的體育,我喜歡最騎自行車。在我的記憶,有許多有趣的事關於騎馬自行車。當我是一個小女孩,我的更老的姐妹教我怎麼騎自行車。我經常騎自行車到處對戲劇與其它孩子。去年夏天假期,我的最好的朋友和我去巴里島乘自行車。我們有非常好時光和希望做同樣事下次。我相信,騎自行車可能帶來人更加接近。2.Iliketoridethebicycle,facingthefeelingofbreeze.Iwasalsoadmiringthescenerywhileridingthebicycle.Ridingbicyclenotonlymakesmehappybutalsohelpmethrowoutmyworries.Itmakesmyhealthbecomebetter.Anditalsoletmefeelfullofpowerinmybody.Themostimportantthingisthatridingbicyclecan’tproduceairpollution.Ridingbicycleisagreatbenefittothebodyandtheentireworld.中文翻譯:我喜歡騎自行車,面對微風的感覺。我並且敬佩風景當騎自行車。騎馬自行車不僅使我愉快而且幫助我投擲在我的憂慮之外。它做我的健康成為更好。並且它並且讓我充分感覺力量在我的身體。最重要的事是,乘坐的自行車無法導致大氣汙染。騎馬自行車是一個極大好處對身體和全世界。...Showmore

By Iris
at 2007-12-20T19:51

Ridingabikeismyfavoritesports.Therearemanygreatmemoriesaboutridingabikeinmylife.MyoldersistertaughtmehowtorideabikewhenIwasalittlegirl.Iusuallyrodemybiketoanyplaceandplayaroundwithmyfriends.(Don'tsay"bybike".DidyouridebiketoBali?)IwentBaliwithmybestfriendsandenjoyedridingbikesovertherelastsummer.Wehadaverygoodtimeandwehopedtodosamethingnexttime.Ibelievethatridingabikecanbringpeoplecloser.Ilikedthatfeelingcalmwindonmyfacewhenridingmybike.Ialsoenjoyedthebeautifulviewatthattime.Notonlymakesmehappy,ridingabikealsoHELPSmethrowawaymyworries.(ThatisChineseEnglish.Notgood.)Itmakesmehealthy.Anditalsomakesmefeelfullofenergyinmybody.Themostimportantthingisthatridingabikewon'tproduceairpollution....Showmore

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